Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 6 August 2020

All children should not have pets

It confuses me how people think that all children should have pets. This is because they can make you sad,they are sneaky,vicious and expensive. I can tell you now that your pet will emotionally make you sad or hurt because they will eventually die!!
 
Firstly they can be super sneaky and vicious,for cats they are lazy and just want attention and they might want to break everything in your house.They can die and it's very sad and not good for your mental health, and some pets are just lazy.
 
Secondly they are very expensive and you might not have enough time to train or even get food or water for your pet. They can be easily neglected .If you have an untrained dog and a baby your baby will be harmed. 
 
Finally they can be very expensive and sometimes they just want food just to have food and that's just wasting your money.
 
Conclusion that's why I think you should not have pets.




Tuesday, 16 June 2020

My drawing for the crayons quit!

W.A.L.T. persuasive letter,this is my drawing I 
did on my chrome book for my crayons quit blog
so I hope you like it.

Tuesday, 2 June 2020

The Evil Shoe Maker

W.A.L.T.  Analyse and create a character description

This is The Evil Shoe Maker. He lives in a small town in
Paris.

He has no friends. He lives in a fancy truck that makes
shoes. He wears a fancy tux with a white T-shirt 
underneath. He looks mean,growly and spoilt. He sells 
shoes for a living. His stance is really spoilt and he moves
like a boss.

If you ever come across The Evil Shoe Maker play it cool...

Tuesday, 19 May 2020

Thank you Duffy

Dear Duffy Books,
 thank you for letting us pick the the books we like
and getting to enjoy reading it.I picked Twin spin and Unschooled,I
am really looking forward to read my books at night. The things I like about the
book is the front cover looks so colourful and I cant wait to read it.

Thank you so much Duffy Books

Nevaeh.




Tuesday, 12 May 2020

My awesome blanket fort

Today I am going to show you in this video
below my awesome fort that my baby brother and
me made I hope you enjoy the video.

Maybe you could build a  blanket fort so it brings fun
to your lookdown.



Monday, 4 May 2020

paper plane challenge

We are learning to create a paper plane and measure   how far the
paper plane will go.I have a video below on how to create 
a paper plane and you will also see in the video how far my paper plane
will go.

Enjoy the video.




Friday, 1 May 2020

My Experience in look down

For the past 4 weeks we have been in look down. I am gonna tell you about 
What I have been doing.I have baked lost of yummy,healthy,and delicious
Sweets like,brownies,feijoa cupcakes, russion fudge, and many more.
We have also done some arts and crafts and we even brought  the slip n slide
Out, that was so fun I have also been doing online school work and ive also planted
coriander seeds go cheek that out.
Tell me what have you been doing in the past look down?

Monday, 27 April 2020

How to plant coriander seeds

Hi guys today i´m going to show you how to plant coriander
seeds , I hope you enjoy this tutorial, and I hope it brings fun to your lock down.
This is my video on  how to plant coriander seeds enjoy


Thursday, 23 April 2020

My Fun mini obstacle course

We are in look down and my teacher  said we could do
a obstacle course inside or outside I choose outside so
it could be more challenging so the first step of building
my obstacle course is  step 1. get all your equipment
step 2. put it in any way you like step 3. make sure you have
shoes on step 4. do a practise round   step 5. make sure you
have your obstacle course the way you like and have fun

Here,s my fantastic obstacle course



Wednesday, 15 April 2020

The prodigal son 3 main points


The prodigal son 3 main points
This is Jesus the son of God and the saviour of the
World,while he was on earth he healed and brought people
Back to life but this made the Jewish leaders mad they said 
Jesus shouldn't be around these kinds of people.

Jesus told them this story.The man has two sons one older
And one younger, the younger brother said I want my share of money
Before you die so his father agreed and gave him it a few days later
He packed his stuff and left to spend and there he wasted all the money
that his dad gave him.

The younger brother soon had nothing so he went to a farmer 
And convinced the farmer to hire him so the farmer sent him 
To feed the pigs, he became so hungry he thought the pigs food
Was good,finally he said to himself if i go home i could be a servant
And here i'm dying of hunger,i'll go to my father and say my apologise
but when i got home he said to give me new shoes and to have a big 
Feast when the older brother heard he said to his dad why is he having
feast when he took your money,the father said he sinned and came back
to life.




Friday, 20 March 2020



Magnificent  monorail

Thursday 26th of February

My favourite moment at Living Springs was the amazing 
super duper fast monorail!.When you went on it your heart  would be bursting and it was on a big hill so that made it ten times worse.

But do you know what the scariest part of it is? The corners, because when you're turning you feel like you're going to fall off! Thank you Living Springs for an awesome time.

Wednesday, 11 December 2019

The mirror

We have been learning about a narrative.this is what you will need in a narrative.
A title a problem and some characters. Introduce the characters and say what they look
like. I enjoyed finding a picture and using cool fonts.
I found punctuation hard because some times I don´t  know where to put them.
my next step is  using more punctuation, I will do this by

what did you like about this story?  





The mirror 



¨I did it!¨ I said, I finally opened the abandoned hospital ́s front door but Harper was afraid of ghosts and monsters.
I said ̈we ́re just a bunch of children going to an abandoned hospital like it's not
going to be scary, it's been closed for centuries.¨ Take one deep breath ̈come
on ̈, ̈FINE ̈ Claudia did the same.̈ ̈OMG!!!̈ Screamed Claudia and me why are
the lights turning off and on.Harper started crying .OMG the light is completely off .Harper is that you moving? NO, it's not me Claudia said.¨BOOM ̈ a  ghost pops up in front of us we try to run from it but it keeps on following
us.
.. 
It was our friend that we didn't even invite, carrying a fake ghost costume. They walk up to us and says ̈ITS A PRANK ́and we all start laughing!!!                                   

Tuataras

In room 4 we are learning to write an explanation about animal
life cycles.you had to find an animal to do a life cycle and research
it.

you need for your explanation writing is subtitles factual information
your stages title date technical language and a introduction.


The thing that went well was that I found a lot of information
about tuataras.

My next step is maybe making my words smaller.

My question is have you ever done a life cycle about an animal ?



                       Tuatara 

       This is a life cycle of a tuatara.
         
           The egg
        A female tuatara lays 10-19 eggs in
A deep burrow underground.The eggs stay underground
For 12 to 15 months before hatching.If it is cold it will be a female and if it was warm it would be a male.


           The hatchling
 The hatchlings come out of there eggs and the hatchling
Are left to defend themselves The hatchlings also grows three eyes and they are about 12-15cm long.


           juvenile 
Juvenile tuataras do not mate or have babies.
Juveniles avoid adult  tuataras by only coming out
During the night to hunt.juvenile tuataras grow scales over there third eye also they are around 45-60 cm long.

    The adult tuatara
Adult tuataras sleep during the day and hunt at night.
They eat beetles,crickets,spiders,frogs, lizards,eggs and bids. Tuataras are cannibals they eat members of tere spices.

I hope you learnt something new.Have you ever done a life cycle on a animal 


Thursday, 5 December 2019

the frog life cycle

The frog life cycle


The process that turns an egg into a frog is called metamorphosis.                 


The egg Stage


The female lays eggs.The male protects
Eggs from predators and it takes 14-20
Days till they hatch.


The tadpole Stage


The eggs hatch and the tadpole has a tail to swim and it also eats algae.After
 around 5 weeks the tadpoles gills are replaced by aflod skin.around 5 weeks the tadpoles gills are replaced by aflod skin.
around 5 weeks the tadpoles gills are replaced by aflod skin.
 around 5 weeks the tadpoles gills are replaced by aflod skin.around 5 weeks the tadpoles gills are replaced by aflod skin.
around 5 weeks the tadpoles gills are replaced by aflod skin.

The froglet stage


The tadpole develops back legs and tiny teeth. The mouth becomes a boarder and eyes become more prominent.After 10-12 weeks the tadpole develops the front legs too and becomes a froglet.The digestion system changes so it can eat bugs.

The frog stage
The froglet absorbs its tail and after 2 more weeks and it's considered an adult frog.Within a period of four years 

This new frog starts breeding and its life cycle continues.

Friday, 8 November 2019

saving the sand dunes😯😯


                          saving the sand dunes!!!!

Me and my class are  learning to care for the sand dunes. We went to the beach to learn to care for the land
because in Religious education we are learning to care for  the land.Sand dunes protect us because
if we did,t have any sand dunes the house,s will always get sand on there front yard.We also made little 
sand dunes full of decoration the decoration was based on the plants like the ice plants,pingoa,and other.The lady that was teaching us was called Cecilia.
she gave us little green fence,s that are in new Brighton  but bigger and little steps to stand on at the beach but Evan  bigger.It was super fun.Have you thought of looking after the and dunes in new Brighton 😉😊😁    


           

   





Wednesday, 6 November 2019

surface pressure experiment

In room 4 we did an experiment to see
If the balloons will burst here is my recount
about surface pressure experiment.

Surface pressure experiment

In room 4 we did a surface pressure
Experiment. We did an experiment to see how many people we could fit on the table on the balloons before they pop!

First We blew up some balloons and tied them up.
Second We turned the desk upside down Third       then we put the table on the balloons.
Forth we tried to fit as much people as we could on the desk.
Fifth We could fit six people balancing on the table 

I felt super nervous because I was someone who went
On it. It felt was so wobbly 









Friday, 25 October 2019

Best day Ever!!!!!!!!!!😉😯😯


we have been learning about recounts. This is my goal My goal is  using more
punctuation and  adding detail to my sentence,s. This is my recount about my best day ever.


   Best Day Ever!!

I saw the water sparkling and gleaming.
I saw the bright blue sky.
I heard the waves crashing together.
I heard the sea as I put a seashell towards my ear.
I felt warm as me and my brothers dived into the ocean.
I felt the water slashing my face as I hopped in the ocean.

I wonder if I could do a triple back flip in the ocean.






                             

Thursday, 26 September 2019

Chrome book tip

What I have been learning instructions.I wrote instructions on how to do a screenshot.


We used screen castify to record it,it made me mad because there was a lot of people coming through my video. Here,s a video on how to do a screenshot.









Tuesday, 10 September 2019

How to draw a flower


Goal: is to draw a flower.

What you need: paper and a pen.

step.1  put the paper on a flat suffice and draw a   medium   size circle
then attach a medium size line on the circle.

step. 3 Then draw the letter u all around the circle (but dont draw the line)
so its curved.

step. 4 Then draw two leafs on the line then draw a dot in the circle 

finally you have a flower


Thursday, 4 July 2019

Chilling with coco!!!😎

We have been learning to describe a character.To describe my character I had to say what it looks like and what they do and likes and dislikes. I enjoyed learning to write similes in my sentences I found challenging finding a game character. I became a better writer by describing a character using similes.
What do you find challenging when describing a character ??