A title a problem and some characters. Introduce the characters and say what they look
like. I enjoyed finding a picture and using cool fonts.
I found punctuation hard because some times I don´t know where to put them.
my next step is using more punctuation, I will do this by
what did you like about this story?
The mirror
¨I did it!¨ I said, I finally opened the abandoned hospital ́s front door but Harper was afraid of ghosts and monsters.
I said ̈we ́re just a bunch of children going to an abandoned hospital like it's not
going to be scary, it's been closed for centuries.¨ Take one deep breath ̈come
on ̈, ̈FINE ̈ Claudia did the same.̈ ̈OMG!!!̈ Screamed Claudia and me why are
the lights turning off and on.Harper started crying .OMG the light is completely off .Harper is that you moving? NO, it's not me Claudia said.¨BOOM ̈ a ghost pops up in front of us we try to run from it but it keeps on following
us.
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It was our friend that we didn't even invite, carrying a fake ghost costume. They walk up to us and says ̈ITS A PRANK ́and we all start laughing!!!
I said ̈we ́re just a bunch of children going to an abandoned hospital like it's not
going to be scary, it's been closed for centuries.¨ Take one deep breath ̈come
on ̈, ̈FINE ̈ Claudia did the same.̈ ̈OMG!!!̈ Screamed Claudia and me why are
the lights turning off and on.Harper started crying .OMG the light is completely off .Harper is that you moving? NO, it's not me Claudia said.¨BOOM ̈ a ghost pops up in front of us we try to run from it but it keeps on following
us.
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