Tuesday, 1 September 2020

Persuasive Writing

  
          
 Dear Miss Pownall,

It's outrageous that people think to not have a dog in the class,this is why,You could do who is the most focused and a good listener will get to take it out for a walk so that makes kids want to act good,
IT could help you be more focused,
Looking after it could teach you how to look after other animals.



Firstly having a dog in the classroom can make kids be much more focused  because you could do who is the best listener and to take the dog out for a walk and that makes kids wanna be good.



Secondly,studies have shown that dogs can help kids with ADHD and release stress. Dogs can help you be more focused in work and it could teach you life lessons.



Thirdly Looking after dogs can teach you to look after other animals and life lessons,and if you grow up with and dog or any other pet will teach you how to look after other  animals.

In Conclusion that's why I think we can have a dog in the classroom.

Yours sincerely,

Nevaeh Gray.


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