Monday, 15 June 2020

THE DAY THE CRAYONS QUIT!!


W.A.L.T. Write a persuasive letter.

 NEVAEH,

Yellow crayon here!
We need to TALK. I am the real colour of the
sun, you better let orange crayon know that. I would, but we are no longer friends... also why aren´t you using me? I would really liked to be used more!

Your unappreciated friend and the real colour of the
sun,

Yellow crayon.
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2 comments:

  1. Miss Pownall16 June 2020 at 12:13

    Well done Nevaeh. I love the way that you have used capital letters to emphasise your point. Ka pai!

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  2. Anonymous16 June 2020 at 14:01

    thanks miss pownall

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