Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 14 May 2020
Character description monsters
The monster is really slithery like a snake,when little red riding hood saw the
horrifying monster with big bold red eyes she ran like super speed to the castle,
the monster couldn't catch up with her.
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This is a great character description Nevaeh, I love the line "slithery like a snake" well done. This sounds like a different version of Red Riding Hood that I know. Did you enjoy it?
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