Friday 25 October 2019

Best day Ever!!!!!!!!!!😉😯😯


we have been learning about recounts. This is my goal My goal is  using more
punctuation and  adding detail to my sentence,s. This is my recount about my best day ever.


   Best Day Ever!!

I saw the water sparkling and gleaming.
I saw the bright blue sky.
I heard the waves crashing together.
I heard the sea as I put a seashell towards my ear.
I felt warm as me and my brothers dived into the ocean.
I felt the water slashing my face as I hopped in the ocean.

I wonder if I could do a triple back flip in the ocean.